Hi Casey, when I read your poem it gave me a real sense of the horror and sadness that happens with war. Your sentence ‘you are soaked in thick gooey mud’ is my favourite and you are right, they would want us to never to forget. Fantastic job! From Mrs J.
Casey, you have chosen powerful words to describe (adjectives) life in the trenches, "terrified, worried, gooey.". You have made a great start to learning@home. Keep it up.
Hi Casey, when I read your poem it gave me a real sense of the horror and sadness that happens with war. Your sentence ‘you are soaked in thick gooey mud’ is my favourite and you are right, they would want us to never to forget. Fantastic job!
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Casey, you have chosen powerful words to describe (adjectives) life in the trenches, "terrified, worried, gooey.". You have made a great start to learning@home. Keep it up.
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