For Reading this week we had to do some facts about the Royal Albatross.
The Royal Albatross is a very important part in the story Alone on a wide wide sea.
The Royal Albatross flies and watches allie while she goes on her great adventure
to find her long lost Antie Kitty.
Hope you like it.
Kia ora Casey. I am Mrs Sugrue from Karoro School. These are some really great facts so I can see you were really interested in learning about the Royal Albatross. The care and consideration you have used in the layout of your slide is really noticeable and I enjoy your use of colour. It is really important to proof read your own work to make sure it makes sense and that your viewer understands the intention of your work. Very well done!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Casey. I hope you are doing well in lockdown. What a magnificent bird the royal albatross is. I agree with Mrs Sugrue's feedback about layout (she is an expert in graphic design). Something for next time, titles of books start with capital letters, "Alone in the Wide, Wide Sea". Keep up with the great learning@home work, Casey.
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